Just noticed a mistake GCS/CELL CONV line 4. That's been edited XD.
Line 5 = sounds a bit weird for me so I might change it soon. Maybe I'll just change it to just "I managed to escape in the end though!"
Line 6 = Haha yeh ... well you know. They're old and the first born son [will] always get the attention!
IGD, line 4 = God, I'm [in] such a state. I definitely need a drink.
IGD, line 1 = Wait ... I forgot to get
Jeez, I should re-read things more before I post them up >_<!
Other things in which I've changed is that I've tried to make Yu sound a bit more 'formal' to make a contrast to his sister but I think he'll slip into informal tendencies whenever he talks to Kemi though.
Also, players can choose which drinks Yu can get coffee/beer/wine XD but the results will be the same either way XD.
Enjoy!
Tim here:
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journey's halfway point and travelling on schedule.
journey's halfway point and presently on scheduale.
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I’m sorry to leave the earlier than planned.
I’m sorry I had to leave earlier than planned.
Awesome sauce, THANKS TIM!!
ReplyDeleteI will keep looking at it to see if I forgot something. Also I came across some art which could help out the graphics side of development.
ReplyDeletehttp://kneekee.deviantart.com/art/Caribou-Coffee-Shop-245515891?q=sort%3Atime%20Coffee%20shop&qo=684
The art style is reminiscent some of the stuff the artists are doing.
AWESOME FIND TIM! Will post a link about it!!!
ReplyDeleteam totally going to re-read the whole script in the next few days so i can keep up XD sorry about this haha
ReplyDeletealso i like that you can choose different alcoholic options but they are ultimately the same... just like in persona haha
ReplyDeleteGotta pretend to make the players more in control when they're not ;)
ReplyDeleteGreat! Yeh sorry for the bed time reading guys! ^ ^
no prob no prob jade! im ashamed that i havent been keeping up to date, im so sorry ><
ReplyDeleteNP! You were busy afterall but I'm sooo glad you're back *hugs* ; A ;
ReplyDeleteme too! i feel like an awful group member, if this were a sitcom id be the one that was all over the place and hardly ever at home lol
ReplyDeleteLOL! In that case I'll be the mother trying to keep everyone together :B
ReplyDeleteit fits :D
ReplyDeleteYay!
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