original render;
colouring attempts;
my first try at colouring over the backgrounds but am not sure this is how you want it to be? :o
crit is welcome and encouraged for I am deeply confused and think i got the lighting wrong! XD the pillars are a bit wonky but i can fix, just wanted to upload an attempt.
Your colouring skillz amazing me even further!!! How was it in the end? Not too difficult I hope? >_<
ReplyDeleteThe colours are perfect, you've got the right tone for the 1st class corridors XD.
- Details to add wil be stuff over the windows like safety signs and no smoking stickers over the windows.
- Don't worry about the bg behind the windows, I'll be making a quick random 'blur' animation to run behind it for the real thing but I'd like to keep what you've done for the bg for when the train is at a stand still for the crash scene if that's ok?
- Back of the corridor would you be able to make it more obvious that it's an automatic slidey door if that's okay?
- Compartment doors will just need to change to letters (Yu's room is carriage 1, room c). So adding a sign somewhere telling you which carriage you're in will also need to be added.
- For the disappearing carriage, the idea was to mark a carriage that really sticks out (like an out of order sign) and for it to disappear. Since the angle of the train is done like this we won't be able to see this. To save time, i'll just use a different filter/texture to emphasise the difference and make it disappear.
Other than that...I'm so happy. I'll download what you've done so far and do some post production to it and see what moody atmospheres I can come up with if you don't mind...
You are awesome man!! This project is definitely picking up again! :D
Oh yes I forgot as well - the compartment doors need to have a semi sophisticated lock system as the keys to each compartment are the user's personal train ticket. Other than that, not much to add :)
ReplyDeleteArghh WHY U SO GOOD?? These look increadible, much better then my crappy first attempts. Seriously love these, it's a great frame of reference for how to paint the rest of the bgs as well as you have a really nice style. Urghh cant stop looking... they're just... tooo... good.
ReplyDeletethanks for the crit jade, im going to go back tomorrow and improve it, then ill post again c:
ReplyDeleteim glad, just want to say now-
THIS IS THE WEEK TO MAKE ME DO THINGS LOL
i have a lot of free time, am gonna visit my sister but since shes at uni a lot of the day i will have nothing to do but draw lol, so yes send send send
and nah this wasnt too difficult or long so i can do quite a few more like this, twas fun actually :D
lastly, do you want the train picture in the day or in the night for the final thing jade? (and i can put in a version with no background too)
thank you mike :o:o:o im glad you like!! (that rhymes...)but you are awesome at colouring too.. still amazed by that glass picture man..
<3
I believe this will be the benchmark for what style the rest of the backgrounds should be, and as Mike said, WHY U SO GOOD!?
ReplyDeleteBoth to Michelle and Mike really: Y U SO GOOD!?
ReplyDeleteTeam Wasabi is definitely FTW!!
WHAT THE BENCHMARK???? o__o i feel like i didnt get it quite like how the bgs are in the reference tim found.. :o but glad you guys like ^//^
ReplyDeleteEVERYONE IN THIS TEAM
Y U SO GOOD
JADE YOU ARE THE MOST MOTIVATED PERSON I KNOW. EVER. YOU CAN DO BLOODY EVERYTHING
AND RUMZI... YOU AND YOUR DAMN 3D MODELS. TOO AMAZING
Winning!
ReplyDeleteSo far there is two version. Sunset for the scenes before the crash then 'blood' sun set after the crash if I remember correctly. If in doubt, skim through the script, it'll be there! BG for the after crash scene but you don't have to worry about that for the time being as the 3D ppl will need to do an after crash render of the bg!
And yes! Michelle, you've set the benchmark!! You have made colouring and illustrator skillz, you're putting yourself down!! XDD
ah cool ill remember that then :D
ReplyDeletebut theres a lot of mistakes here.. ill try and do a proper one tomorrow and then i can be happy with it XD
Awesome, go for it! And I shall be at home working all day anyway :D
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