tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5256555025906670054.post6256950495672349386..comments2023-04-15T10:18:45.586+01:00Comments on Hungry Whispers: Script Day1-v1Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07053286002172760448noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5256555025906670054.post-50727731076178965142011-07-23T10:15:36.738+01:002011-07-23T10:15:36.738+01:00haha :D ILU2 JADEEEE ;w;haha :D ILU2 JADEEEE ;w;Michelle Vinallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04475683890194875319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5256555025906670054.post-83160905636365504192011-07-23T00:30:10.762+01:002011-07-23T00:30:10.762+01:00Aw thanks Michelle! *gwomps!* ILU!!! XDAw thanks Michelle! *gwomps!* ILU!!! XDAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07053286002172760448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5256555025906670054.post-22164359346053707592011-07-22T13:44:02.942+01:002011-07-22T13:44:02.942+01:00i prefer version 2 as well just because it drew me...i prefer version 2 as well just because it drew me in quicker :D but despite what you say jade i think the writing is pretty good and i like it so far c:Michelle Vinallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04475683890194875319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5256555025906670054.post-71005413961798153752011-07-21T21:03:35.896+01:002011-07-21T21:03:35.896+01:00V1 I wrote if Yu was in a very emotional and talka...V1 I wrote if Yu was in a very emotional and talkative sense. V2 was written if he was more...shocked about the whole situation and deadpan. XDAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07053286002172760448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5256555025906670054.post-11242069606215474772011-07-21T17:56:17.886+01:002011-07-21T17:56:17.886+01:00LOL what? I thought they both had emotion..right?LOL what? I thought they both had emotion..right?celarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11990316939124090632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5256555025906670054.post-82480469678804870462011-07-21T12:52:40.954+01:002011-07-21T12:52:40.954+01:00Thanks for the input but quite typical that you...Thanks for the input but quite typical that you'd go for the one 'emotionless' version and Mike would go for the 'emotional' one XD. I'll leave it for a bit and see what the others say.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07053286002172760448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5256555025906670054.post-20043439703063257832011-07-21T08:11:12.328+01:002011-07-21T08:11:12.328+01:00I think version 2 is better. It introduces the cha...I think version 2 is better. It introduces the character, explains his situation, why he is there, gives some background detail and shows the relationship between the brother and sister(and her profession) which is important to the rest of the story. <br /><br />Also the repeated use of "I" works well as it makes it more personal to the player. Also keep the extra cutscene or even just have him saying that bit at the end of the previous cutscene.celarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11990316939124090632noreply@blogger.com